FIC Making Us Crazy
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shanachie_quillTitle: Making Us Crazy
Characters: Danny Williams, Grace Williams, Deborah Beckett (OC-ish), Matt Williams, Steve McGarrett
Fandom: Hawaii Five-O AU
Series: Honolulu 96731 'verse
Summary: Steve gets himself invited to dinner...Williams-style.
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers Just my high school series
Warnings: Boys being stupid and dorky
Disclaimer: Hawaii Five-O doesn’t belong to me, but the High School verse does. And the dorky things the characters got up to as teenagers (also Danny moving to the Islands as a teenager) totally do too. “For the First Time” doesn’t belong to me either, but to The Script. And I am told they are Irish and awesome!
Author's Note: So for those of you who know the story...no I do not have Morrigan back. I do however have an awesome little sister who is learning to be "nice" and lent me her laptop for the evening and possibly tomorrow...so I could type and post what I've finished. :-) I also need to add thank yous to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
illfindmyway and whogeek and irishjeeper who have all been keeping me sane. Hopefully I'll have Morrigan back by Thursday. Special thanks goes to whogeek for loaning me Steve!monster for this chapter and illfindmyway for assistance with the chapter. All other thanks if I've forgotten goes to the normal people. :-)
“What’cha lookin’ at, Gracie?” Danny asked. He paused behind where Grace was kneeling on the couch and looked over her shoulder. “Crap.”
“That’s a bad word, Danno,” she informed him.
“It’s a not so good word,” he told her. “Come on.” He held out his arms to her. “Go help Ma set the table.”
“Is that the boy you were talking to at the beach?” she asked as he helped her clamber down off the couch.
“Don’t worry about it,” he told her. “Go into the kitchen.” Waiting until Grace had disappeared; he headed for the front door.
Steve was across the street, leaning against a Jeep, a pair of aviator shades covering his eyes. At some point the doors had been removed and a surf board stuck out of the back end. As Danny exited the house, he could almost see the flight instinct kick in. After a second though, the lanky boy shoved his hands into his cargo shorts and slouched even more, watching Danny look both ways and cross the street. “You are like stupidly bad at this,” he informed Steve as he reached the boy, stepping far enough onto the side of the street that he wouldn’t be hit if someone came along.
“I have no idea what you’re talking about,” Steve replied, peering at him over the top of his shades.
“You have…You…” Danny stopped, unable to believe that was Steve’s opening gambit. “Really? You’re right across the street from my house! You’re not even trying to disguise the fact that you’re watching it! My baby sister noticed you!”
“It got you to come outside,” Steve pointed out.
Danny tugged on the top of his hair. “I don’t even know what to do with you. You’re not normal, you’re aware of that, right? People don’t act like this.”
Steve opened his mouth to reply, but was stopped by someone calling Danny’s name. Danny turned back towards his house, replying, “I’ll be right in, Ma.” Turning back to Steve, he stabbed a finger at him. “Go. Home. I’ll talk to you at school on Monday.”
Awkwardly, Steve scuffed his sneaker on the ground. “I was hoping…”
Both boys looked up as a shadow fell across them. “Danny, who’s your friend?” his mother asked.
“Ma-aa,” Danny whined.
Steve straightened up when he realized who was addressing him and offered his hand. “Steve McGarrett, ma’am. Danny and I go to school together.”
“Among other things,” Danny muttered. He could have sworn the other boy glared at him through the sunglasses, but Steve didn’t say anything.
“It’s nice to meet one of Danny’s friends,” she replied. She turned to Danny, slipping an arm around his shoulders. “Why don’t you invite your friend for dinner?”
“Ma! Ma! No!” Danny waved a hand at Steve who was watching them with interest. “He’s…he’s insane! He’s like…seriously! He stalks me!”
She kissed the side of his head. “Don’t be silly, sweetie. He just came over to visit you.” She smiled at Steve. “Do you need to call your parents?”
“No, Mrs. Williams. My dad’s working and my mom…” Steve ducked his head. “I lost my mom a few years ago.”
She reached out, cupping his cheek. “Oh, you poor dear. Well, you come on in. And you and Danny can wash up. Matty and Grace are already at the table.”
“I hate you,” Danny hissed as they followed his mom across the street. “You are insane and I don’t know how but you have my mom and the rest of the world fooled, but not me.” He paused before they entered the house. “My mom’s Mrs. Beckett, not Williams. And be nice to Matt and Grace.”
Steve widened his eyes as he took off his sunglasses. “Why wouldn’t I be nice to them?”
“I never know with you,” Danny replied as he pointed to the downstairs bathroom. He decided it was safe enough to leave him alone for a few moments and ran upstairs. By the time he returned, Steve had found his way to the kitchen and was helping his mother put the last of the food on the table.
“Thank you for inviting me to dinner, Mrs. Beckett,” Steve was saying as Danny entered. “It’s nice to have some company for dinner.”
Danny rolled his eyes in response and helped Grace who was reaching for a platter. “Gracie, we ask, we don’t reach,” he reminded her.
Matt stared at Steve until Danny kicked him hard under the table. “What?” he demanded, looking at his older brother.
“Stop,” Danny ordered.
“Stop what?” Matt asked. “I’m just looking at your friend.”
Danny pointed at his brother. “You are acting almost as creepy as him!” His finger swung around to point at Steve.
“Daniel, that is inappropriate,” his mother scolded. “Apologize to both your friend and your brother.”
“It’s okay, Mrs. Beckett,” Steve assured her. “Danny and I have had some interesting run-ins in the last few days. I can’t say he’s wrong with his observations.”
She stared at him for a minute, apparently not sure how to respond to Steve supporting Danny before asking, “Danny said you two go to school together?”
“Yes, ma’am. We don’t have any classes together, but he’s got classes with some of my friends. And we have lunch the same period,” Steve explained.
Danny watched in stupification as Steve proceeded to charm his mother through-out dinner. Gone was the bumbling teen that had accosted him and a charming young man sat in his place. Until she turned away that is and Steve smirked at him; winking. Danny shook his head at the balls of the other boy.
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After his mother glanced at the clock for the third time, Danny said, “Ma, go. We’re fine.”
She looked at Steve before saying, “You know the rules.”
Danny rolled his eyes in response. “Oh, yeah. That’s gonna happen with Gracie here.”
“Past experience...” she started.
“Ma, I’ve learned my lessons. Trust me. Go to work. We’ll see you tomorrow.” When she still didn’t look convinced, he added, “Do I need to remind you I think he’s crazy?”
“Like that’s a deterrent,” Matt muttered from his seat.
Danny threw him a glare, but his mother seemed a bit reassured. “Fine. If you need something...”
“Call Greg at the office,” Danny finished as she kissed the side of his head. “Have a good night, Ma.”
“Be good for your brother,” she instructed, kissing Matt and then Grace. She started to kiss Steve, but stopped. “Sorry, honey. It’s habit.”
“It’s okay, Mrs. Beckett. Thank you for dinner,” Steve replied.
Once she left, Matt opened his mouth to say something, but Danny cut him off, “Don’t, okay? I don’t need your shit tonight. Clear the table and go finish your homework.”
“Dan-no,” Grace pointed out, “you owe the bad jar.”
Danny dug two quarters out of his pocket and showed them to her, dropping them into a jar on the counter as he passed. “Finish your milk, Grace.”
Once both of them had left the kitchen, Steve asked, “What did your mom mean?”
“About what?” Danny replied as he sorted the dishes and began to load the dishwasher.
“About the rules and past experience,” Steve answered, leaning against the counter to enjoy the view when Danny waved off his help.
Danny froze for a moment, before going back to what he had been doing although his movements were a lot stiffer. For a little while he didn’t say anything. Steve wanted to press him and find out what had happened, but he also didn’t want to drive Danny away from him. He’d already seen examples of Danny’s stubbornness and he had a feeling this would bring it out tenfold.
Finally Danny finished what he was doing and closed the dishwasher, turning to face Steve. “She was referring to some stupid choices I made in the past. And the rules I agreed to because of them.”
Steve crossed the room to him, stopping before he pressed up against Danny. “Can I...”
“Hey! Hey! Personal space!” Danny yelped. When Steve just looked at him in confusion, he placed his hands on the other boy’s chest and shoved him backwards. “Don’t,” he warned. He ignored the feel of firmness beneath his hands, the muscles he wanted to touch.
Steve started to reply to his outburst when they were interrupted by Grace’s running in. She looked from one to the other, then grabbed Steve’s hand. “Come color with me! Come play with me!” she demanded.
“Uuuh. I don’t know,” Steve replied as she tugged on his hand.
Danny gave him a wicked smile. “Oh, go play with her. I gotta finish cleaning up in here.”
Glancing back, Steve allowed Grace to pull him from the room. Danny smiled after them as he heard Grace’s excited chatter from the other room. Turning back to the sink, he took a couple of deep breaths, shaking off the memories Steve’s closeness had brought up and started running the water for dishes. He couldn’t afford the distractions. Steve might be just his type--tall, stacked, and brunette--but he had other priorities now. If he ever needed a reminder about those priorities, he just needed to look at Grace; needed to touch the tags that hung around his neck. He couldn’t afford to give in to Steve. Even if he felt himself weakening.
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Shierks of laughter from the other room drew his attention as Danny finished up the dishes. Snagging a towel, he dried his hands as he moved to the doorway.
Grace was standing on the couch, giggling, and obviously trying to stay away from Steve who was on hands and knees before her--growling. She danced away from him, crying, “No! No! Save me from the Steve!Monster, Danno!”
“Save you? Save you?” Danny said with a grin. Swooping down, he picked her up and threw her over his shoulder. “But you just called for help from the Steve!Monster’s partner!” Spinning her around, he tipped her towards Steve. Grace squealed in reaction, but didn’t fight Danny’s hold.
Watching Danny carefully, Steve draped his arms around the shorter boy and tickled the little girl in his arms. Grace wiggled around in Danny’s hold, finally overbalancing all of them and causing them to tumble onto the couch; Steve on the bottom of the pile up and all of them laughing.
Steve whined low in his throat as Danny landed half on top of him. Wide blue eyes met his hazel ones and then Danny was trying to untangle himself and scramble away. Steve’s hands clenched for a moment, wanting to haul the stocky body back against his, but Grace’s curious, “Danno, is something wrong?” reminded him that they had an audience.
Danny knelt in front of Grace, smoothing her hair, and breathing deeply to calm himself. “Nothing’s wrong, Monkey. Nothing at all.” He kissed her on the forehead. “Steve startled me. That’s all.” Standing up, he pointed towards the stairs. “Time for you to get ready for bed. Say good night, Gracie.”
“Good night, Gracie,” she parroted with a grin. Clambering up onto the couch, she kissed Steve on the cheek. “Good night, Stevie.”
Danny managed to hold in his laugh at the gobsmacked look on Steve’s face until Grace disappeared upstairs. “I think someone has a crush on you,” he said when he caught his breath again.
Steve stood up. “How do you feel about me?”
“I won’t do this. I can’t do this,” Danny replied. He motioned towards the door. “I really think it’s time for you to go.”
“All right,” Steve agreed easily and Danny eyed him warily. “I’m not giving up on what I want though,” he added.
“It might be better if you did. I don’t intend to change my mind.”
Steve reached out gently touching Danny’s cheek with the tips of his fingers. “I don’t know who hurt you or why you won’t let me ask you out, but I’m not done yet.”
“No one hurt me,” Danny answered. “I don’t date psychos.”
Steve smirked at him. “But you say that with such affection in your voice.” Ducking his head, he pressed his lips to Danny’s, then danced out of reach before the shorter man could retaliate. “Good night, Danny.”
Danny’s mouth opened and closed a couple of times before he got out a strangled, “Ste-ven!”
Steve smirked at him again from where he stood by the door. “Think about it. And, Danny, do me a favor? Talk to Chin or even Kono about your tutoring situation. Masters is an asshole and isn’t gonna help you.”
Danny nodded. “Yeah. Thanks.” Unsure what else to say, he watched Steve walk out the door. Turning, he went to tuck Grace in and build his defenses back up; it looked like he was going to have to work harder to keep Steve out of his life.
Characters: Danny Williams, Grace Williams, Deborah Beckett (OC-ish), Matt Williams, Steve McGarrett
Fandom: Hawaii Five-O AU
Series: Honolulu 96731 'verse
Summary: Steve gets himself invited to dinner...Williams-style.
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers Just my high school series
Warnings: Boys being stupid and dorky
Disclaimer: Hawaii Five-O doesn’t belong to me, but the High School verse does. And the dorky things the characters got up to as teenagers (also Danny moving to the Islands as a teenager) totally do too. “For the First Time” doesn’t belong to me either, but to The Script. And I am told they are Irish and awesome!
Author's Note: So for those of you who know the story...no I do not have Morrigan back. I do however have an awesome little sister who is learning to be "nice" and lent me her laptop for the evening and possibly tomorrow...so I could type and post what I've finished. :-) I also need to add thank yous to
illfindmyway and whogeek and irishjeeper who have all been keeping me sane. Hopefully I'll have Morrigan back by Thursday. Special thanks goes to whogeek for loaning me Steve!monster for this chapter and illfindmyway for assistance with the chapter. All other thanks if I've forgotten goes to the normal people. :-)“What’cha lookin’ at, Gracie?” Danny asked. He paused behind where Grace was kneeling on the couch and looked over her shoulder. “Crap.”
“That’s a bad word, Danno,” she informed him.
“It’s a not so good word,” he told her. “Come on.” He held out his arms to her. “Go help Ma set the table.”
“Is that the boy you were talking to at the beach?” she asked as he helped her clamber down off the couch.
“Don’t worry about it,” he told her. “Go into the kitchen.” Waiting until Grace had disappeared; he headed for the front door.
Steve was across the street, leaning against a Jeep, a pair of aviator shades covering his eyes. At some point the doors had been removed and a surf board stuck out of the back end. As Danny exited the house, he could almost see the flight instinct kick in. After a second though, the lanky boy shoved his hands into his cargo shorts and slouched even more, watching Danny look both ways and cross the street. “You are like stupidly bad at this,” he informed Steve as he reached the boy, stepping far enough onto the side of the street that he wouldn’t be hit if someone came along.
“I have no idea what you’re talking about,” Steve replied, peering at him over the top of his shades.
“You have…You…” Danny stopped, unable to believe that was Steve’s opening gambit. “Really? You’re right across the street from my house! You’re not even trying to disguise the fact that you’re watching it! My baby sister noticed you!”
“It got you to come outside,” Steve pointed out.
Danny tugged on the top of his hair. “I don’t even know what to do with you. You’re not normal, you’re aware of that, right? People don’t act like this.”
Steve opened his mouth to reply, but was stopped by someone calling Danny’s name. Danny turned back towards his house, replying, “I’ll be right in, Ma.” Turning back to Steve, he stabbed a finger at him. “Go. Home. I’ll talk to you at school on Monday.”
Awkwardly, Steve scuffed his sneaker on the ground. “I was hoping…”
Both boys looked up as a shadow fell across them. “Danny, who’s your friend?” his mother asked.
“Ma-aa,” Danny whined.
Steve straightened up when he realized who was addressing him and offered his hand. “Steve McGarrett, ma’am. Danny and I go to school together.”
“Among other things,” Danny muttered. He could have sworn the other boy glared at him through the sunglasses, but Steve didn’t say anything.
“It’s nice to meet one of Danny’s friends,” she replied. She turned to Danny, slipping an arm around his shoulders. “Why don’t you invite your friend for dinner?”
“Ma! Ma! No!” Danny waved a hand at Steve who was watching them with interest. “He’s…he’s insane! He’s like…seriously! He stalks me!”
She kissed the side of his head. “Don’t be silly, sweetie. He just came over to visit you.” She smiled at Steve. “Do you need to call your parents?”
“No, Mrs. Williams. My dad’s working and my mom…” Steve ducked his head. “I lost my mom a few years ago.”
She reached out, cupping his cheek. “Oh, you poor dear. Well, you come on in. And you and Danny can wash up. Matty and Grace are already at the table.”
“I hate you,” Danny hissed as they followed his mom across the street. “You are insane and I don’t know how but you have my mom and the rest of the world fooled, but not me.” He paused before they entered the house. “My mom’s Mrs. Beckett, not Williams. And be nice to Matt and Grace.”
Steve widened his eyes as he took off his sunglasses. “Why wouldn’t I be nice to them?”
“I never know with you,” Danny replied as he pointed to the downstairs bathroom. He decided it was safe enough to leave him alone for a few moments and ran upstairs. By the time he returned, Steve had found his way to the kitchen and was helping his mother put the last of the food on the table.
“Thank you for inviting me to dinner, Mrs. Beckett,” Steve was saying as Danny entered. “It’s nice to have some company for dinner.”
Danny rolled his eyes in response and helped Grace who was reaching for a platter. “Gracie, we ask, we don’t reach,” he reminded her.
Matt stared at Steve until Danny kicked him hard under the table. “What?” he demanded, looking at his older brother.
“Stop,” Danny ordered.
“Stop what?” Matt asked. “I’m just looking at your friend.”
Danny pointed at his brother. “You are acting almost as creepy as him!” His finger swung around to point at Steve.
“Daniel, that is inappropriate,” his mother scolded. “Apologize to both your friend and your brother.”
“It’s okay, Mrs. Beckett,” Steve assured her. “Danny and I have had some interesting run-ins in the last few days. I can’t say he’s wrong with his observations.”
She stared at him for a minute, apparently not sure how to respond to Steve supporting Danny before asking, “Danny said you two go to school together?”
“Yes, ma’am. We don’t have any classes together, but he’s got classes with some of my friends. And we have lunch the same period,” Steve explained.
Danny watched in stupification as Steve proceeded to charm his mother through-out dinner. Gone was the bumbling teen that had accosted him and a charming young man sat in his place. Until she turned away that is and Steve smirked at him; winking. Danny shook his head at the balls of the other boy.
After his mother glanced at the clock for the third time, Danny said, “Ma, go. We’re fine.”
She looked at Steve before saying, “You know the rules.”
Danny rolled his eyes in response. “Oh, yeah. That’s gonna happen with Gracie here.”
“Past experience...” she started.
“Ma, I’ve learned my lessons. Trust me. Go to work. We’ll see you tomorrow.” When she still didn’t look convinced, he added, “Do I need to remind you I think he’s crazy?”
“Like that’s a deterrent,” Matt muttered from his seat.
Danny threw him a glare, but his mother seemed a bit reassured. “Fine. If you need something...”
“Call Greg at the office,” Danny finished as she kissed the side of his head. “Have a good night, Ma.”
“Be good for your brother,” she instructed, kissing Matt and then Grace. She started to kiss Steve, but stopped. “Sorry, honey. It’s habit.”
“It’s okay, Mrs. Beckett. Thank you for dinner,” Steve replied.
Once she left, Matt opened his mouth to say something, but Danny cut him off, “Don’t, okay? I don’t need your shit tonight. Clear the table and go finish your homework.”
“Dan-no,” Grace pointed out, “you owe the bad jar.”
Danny dug two quarters out of his pocket and showed them to her, dropping them into a jar on the counter as he passed. “Finish your milk, Grace.”
Once both of them had left the kitchen, Steve asked, “What did your mom mean?”
“About what?” Danny replied as he sorted the dishes and began to load the dishwasher.
“About the rules and past experience,” Steve answered, leaning against the counter to enjoy the view when Danny waved off his help.
Danny froze for a moment, before going back to what he had been doing although his movements were a lot stiffer. For a little while he didn’t say anything. Steve wanted to press him and find out what had happened, but he also didn’t want to drive Danny away from him. He’d already seen examples of Danny’s stubbornness and he had a feeling this would bring it out tenfold.
Finally Danny finished what he was doing and closed the dishwasher, turning to face Steve. “She was referring to some stupid choices I made in the past. And the rules I agreed to because of them.”
Steve crossed the room to him, stopping before he pressed up against Danny. “Can I...”
“Hey! Hey! Personal space!” Danny yelped. When Steve just looked at him in confusion, he placed his hands on the other boy’s chest and shoved him backwards. “Don’t,” he warned. He ignored the feel of firmness beneath his hands, the muscles he wanted to touch.
Steve started to reply to his outburst when they were interrupted by Grace’s running in. She looked from one to the other, then grabbed Steve’s hand. “Come color with me! Come play with me!” she demanded.
“Uuuh. I don’t know,” Steve replied as she tugged on his hand.
Danny gave him a wicked smile. “Oh, go play with her. I gotta finish cleaning up in here.”
Glancing back, Steve allowed Grace to pull him from the room. Danny smiled after them as he heard Grace’s excited chatter from the other room. Turning back to the sink, he took a couple of deep breaths, shaking off the memories Steve’s closeness had brought up and started running the water for dishes. He couldn’t afford the distractions. Steve might be just his type--tall, stacked, and brunette--but he had other priorities now. If he ever needed a reminder about those priorities, he just needed to look at Grace; needed to touch the tags that hung around his neck. He couldn’t afford to give in to Steve. Even if he felt himself weakening.
Shierks of laughter from the other room drew his attention as Danny finished up the dishes. Snagging a towel, he dried his hands as he moved to the doorway.
Grace was standing on the couch, giggling, and obviously trying to stay away from Steve who was on hands and knees before her--growling. She danced away from him, crying, “No! No! Save me from the Steve!Monster, Danno!”
“Save you? Save you?” Danny said with a grin. Swooping down, he picked her up and threw her over his shoulder. “But you just called for help from the Steve!Monster’s partner!” Spinning her around, he tipped her towards Steve. Grace squealed in reaction, but didn’t fight Danny’s hold.
Watching Danny carefully, Steve draped his arms around the shorter boy and tickled the little girl in his arms. Grace wiggled around in Danny’s hold, finally overbalancing all of them and causing them to tumble onto the couch; Steve on the bottom of the pile up and all of them laughing.
Steve whined low in his throat as Danny landed half on top of him. Wide blue eyes met his hazel ones and then Danny was trying to untangle himself and scramble away. Steve’s hands clenched for a moment, wanting to haul the stocky body back against his, but Grace’s curious, “Danno, is something wrong?” reminded him that they had an audience.
Danny knelt in front of Grace, smoothing her hair, and breathing deeply to calm himself. “Nothing’s wrong, Monkey. Nothing at all.” He kissed her on the forehead. “Steve startled me. That’s all.” Standing up, he pointed towards the stairs. “Time for you to get ready for bed. Say good night, Gracie.”
“Good night, Gracie,” she parroted with a grin. Clambering up onto the couch, she kissed Steve on the cheek. “Good night, Stevie.”
Danny managed to hold in his laugh at the gobsmacked look on Steve’s face until Grace disappeared upstairs. “I think someone has a crush on you,” he said when he caught his breath again.
Steve stood up. “How do you feel about me?”
“I won’t do this. I can’t do this,” Danny replied. He motioned towards the door. “I really think it’s time for you to go.”
“All right,” Steve agreed easily and Danny eyed him warily. “I’m not giving up on what I want though,” he added.
“It might be better if you did. I don’t intend to change my mind.”
Steve reached out gently touching Danny’s cheek with the tips of his fingers. “I don’t know who hurt you or why you won’t let me ask you out, but I’m not done yet.”
“No one hurt me,” Danny answered. “I don’t date psychos.”
Steve smirked at him. “But you say that with such affection in your voice.” Ducking his head, he pressed his lips to Danny’s, then danced out of reach before the shorter man could retaliate. “Good night, Danny.”
Danny’s mouth opened and closed a couple of times before he got out a strangled, “Ste-ven!”
Steve smirked at him again from where he stood by the door. “Think about it. And, Danny, do me a favor? Talk to Chin or even Kono about your tutoring situation. Masters is an asshole and isn’t gonna help you.”
Danny nodded. “Yeah. Thanks.” Unsure what else to say, he watched Steve walk out the door. Turning, he went to tuck Grace in and build his defenses back up; it looked like he was going to have to work harder to keep Steve out of his life.
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15/3/11 03:03 (UTC)(no subject)
15/3/11 04:00 (UTC)*cuddles boys*
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15/3/11 03:09 (UTC)*Sighs* I just love these boys *_*
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15/3/11 04:02 (UTC)(no subject)
15/3/11 03:22 (UTC)IT'SNOTCREEPYIT'SFLATTERINGWHATAREYOUTALKINGABOUT
*hum* So yeah, I enjoy very much this story and I would be delighted to soon read the next installment. Thank you very much.
PS: CHIN'S FACE= TOTALLY MINE WHEN I SAW IT
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15/3/11 04:09 (UTC)So I'm sorry to say that although I have two more stories started in this verse (actually the next two in this arc)...I'm not sure when they will be posted.
Plus my poor hand is getting sore from writing everything out long hand.
I am glad you are enjoying them though and I look forward to feeding you more in the future.
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15/3/11 04:40 (UTC)(no subject)
15/3/11 12:24 (UTC)He does...and there's a reason for it...which will come out later in the series, but I'm not quite ready to reveal that yet. Rest assured there is no lie here, Danny is not actually her father.
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15/3/11 06:48 (UTC)One (tiny little thing) I noticed - I hope you don't mind but
"Shirks of laughter from the other room drew his attention as Danny finished up the dishes. Snagging a towel, he dried his hands as he moved to the doorway."
I think you probably meant "Shrieks". :)
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15/3/11 12:39 (UTC)I did. I'm working on someone else's computer right now...and they do not have a word processing program. So I was typing on-line. The program could not decide on that word...so I went with my best guess...which clearly didn't work.
And I never mind unless someone is rude about correcting me. You don't learn or improve unless you're giving pointers. Thanks for the heads up!
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15/3/11 08:37 (UTC)^-^ Silly silly Stalker!Steve, he's so persistent in his quest. Steve!Monster is adorable.
I can't wait to read what he'll think of next to spend more time with Danny, and steal more kisses.
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15/3/11 12:45 (UTC):-) He persistent. One might even call him hard-headed.
:-D Steve!monster is compliments of my friend whogeek. She used him in one of her stories. And I thought he was so adorable that he needed another return. I can't look for the link right now...but if you look in the archives on stevedannoslash, I believe its in there. It's one of her Grace series.
Well...we're getting close to the end of this arc. There's only two more stories. Both of which I've started. I've got the last one about halfway done and the second to last 2 pages in. So far he's not gotten to steal anymore kisses. :-) Not for lack of trying though.
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15/3/11 12:39 (UTC)Steve!monster may just be one of the greatest things ever.
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15/3/11 12:48 (UTC)Steve!monster is awesome! :-D and my friend whogeek is the best in the world for letting me borrow him to play with Grace. :-)
Now I have to go make breakfast :-)
Take the car to the shop :-/
And possibly return my borrowed laptop :-(
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15/3/11 12:56 (UTC)*pets him*
Does this mean you have your baby back?
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15/3/11 14:16 (UTC)*cuddles him* I love my boys. Which is sooo wrong considering they're fictional characters.
*sighs* No. I do not. I have a substitute for a few hours. My Boo loaned me her laptop for last night into today and I have to give it back...although I'm not entirely sure WHEN today I have to. I'm hoping to keep it until tonight...but I have nothing else finished anyway.
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15/3/11 14:25 (UTC)Did they give you an ETA?
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15/3/11 14:28 (UTC)Um...yesterday?
LOL new ETA is Wednesday or Thursday...but she might be wiped when I get her. They aren't sure yet.
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15/3/11 17:49 (UTC)I got a call yesterday asking if I'd been called and if I would come pay for the part (from the tech). I explained what had happened--the AM hadn't left a note, had made no notation that he'd contacted me, and then had the gall to tell me I was lying about saying he said I didn't have to pay upfront. (Which I knew I had to)
So Morrigan sat in the shop for two days with no one working on her and my part did not get ordered...I'm pissed...but not at the tech because he called me pretty much as soon as he got to the store yesterday.
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15/3/11 14:09 (UTC)Man, when Steve wants to turn on the charm, he does it full throttle--Danny's mom never stood a chance :) And listening to his mom's words make it rather obvious that she's fully aware that Steve wants Danny and that Danny's interested to.
And while I admire Danny's trying to resist Steve, this line: Steve reached out gently touching Danny’s cheek with the tips of his fingers. “I don’t know who hurt you or why you won’t let me ask you out, but I’m not done yet.” made me freakin' squee. I love seeing Steve all determined to win Danny and Danny vowing not to be wooed.
Good, good stuff :)
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15/3/11 14:22 (UTC)Yes, Steve can be charming...he's just a bit...bass ackwards at times.
Danny's mom is fully aware of Danny's type. And supports that. What she doesn't support is some of the choices Danny made in the past, hence the rules and other comments. So far...she likes Steve :-)
LOL Steve is pretty damn hard to resist. And it's not Steve per se that Danny is trying to resist, but everything Danny thinks Steve represents. Don't worry...they'll get there.
Glad you think so.
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15/3/11 20:54 (UTC)Yeah...well...um...Grace is not gonna react the best to Danny and Steve...but you'll see.
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16/3/11 22:43 (UTC)I maybe phrased that wrong? It's not Steve she objects to. It would pretty much be anyone Danny decided to go out with...make more sense? Grace is not always a rational child when it comes to Danny.
And my baby is back...but she is stripped down to factory programs so I am in the process of customizing her again. *pets my baby*
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16/3/11 23:38 (UTC)Iwillbepatient
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No, it does make sense. It's something we've seen slightly in canon, so it makes sense if they were closer in age.
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17/3/11 00:37 (UTC)So I'm gonna be balancing the two of them for a few days. I know Destiny isn't going anywhere quickly because I have to do time line and research before I'm ready to really work on it...but I needed to get it out today in order to let the teens have full voice again.
I'm working hard on re-installing everything...the good news? All my files are intact. And I have Word on here again :-)
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15/3/11 20:42 (UTC)this was soo good! i love how steve is a total goof for danny, no mater what age he is... and danny doesnt dadt psycho's indeed, im pritty sure danny is a tall, dark and psycho magnet. lucky bastard XD
great job! i cant wait to see where this goes next!
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