Nice. Like seeing why they ended up in Hawaii. And Danny being protective older brother to Matt. :D And trouble finds Danny in Hawaii, in the form of one Steve McGarrett. XD
Also, spelling quibbles: I think you mean Danny "backs up a step" rather than a "set" when Grace tackle-hugs him, and "we've" talked, not "we're" from Ms. Williams. And when Danny is thinking about his step-father, "and was actually civil to him" you're missing the was there. :D
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22/2/11 17:43 (UTC)Also, spelling quibbles: I think you mean Danny "backs up a step" rather than a "set" when Grace tackle-hugs him, and "we've" talked, not "we're" from Ms. Williams. And when Danny is thinking about his step-father, "and was actually civil to him" you're missing the was there. :D