I love this series, so much. And this installment actually tops, which I wasn't sure was possible. I am so in awe of how they sound exactly the same but still teenage in this series. Kudos.

One (tiny little thing) I noticed - I hope you don't mind but
"Shirks of laughter from the other room drew his attention as Danny finished up the dishes. Snagging a towel, he dried his hands as he moved to the doorway."

I think you probably meant "Shrieks". :)